That was really, really good. I loved all those broken-sentenced thoughts. It made it seem really fast-paced and frantic! And Paragraph Number... 9? Yes? Well, that was a totally convincing example that run-on sentences can really be used effectively.
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That was really, really good. I loved all those broken-sentenced thoughts. It made it seem really fast-paced and frantic! And Paragraph Number... 9? Yes? Well, that was a totally convincing example that run-on sentences can really be used effectively.
Kudos, it was awesome. <3