tallulahgs: (Default)
tallulahgs ([personal profile] tallulahgs) wrote 2005-01-28 08:49 am (UTC)

Sounds, er, strange.
Consider whether all your plot points are necessary? And/or plausible? If it's just confusing, make sure you put in as much info as you can to help the reader.
Sounds intriguing, though. Is it fanfic?

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