1) I love it. I love the little snatches of life you get for all of the characters, it really makes me feel for whoever they are. The last line is WONDERFUL.
2) What IS is about the Marauders that makes them so good for this? I wrote one, iamisaac wrote one and you've written one! Oh well, yours is lovely! I love Lily's confusion and Sirius happily joining in! And Wormtail should be proud to be Ringo. GO RINGO! :D
3) I LOVE IT! Your Ginji voice is really well done - his hopeful line about getting paid and getting to eat turkey and have crackers is really, really him. It's very, very well done and Ban's all bitter and they just ... click. It's AWESOME, I adore it.
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2) What IS is about the Marauders that makes them so good for this? I wrote one,
3) I LOVE IT! Your Ginji voice is really well done - his hopeful line about getting paid and getting to eat turkey and have crackers is really, really him. It's very, very well done and Ban's all bitter and they just ... click. It's AWESOME, I adore it.