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tallulahgs) wrote2007-04-29 08:35 pm
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Fanfiction update lol
Chapter Three of Under My Skin is up! Reviews appreciated. This chapter has some slash, of sorts, but nothing above a PG-to-mild-PG-13 level.
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Though, I can't help but feel sorry for Kai. When/if Kaori and Yamagata's minds do get put back in their bodies, if Kai tries to make a move on Yama, he's gonna get punched into the wall and have every single swear known to man (and maybe a potted plant of some sort) thrown at him.
The chapter overall was really cute X3 It almost seemed more fluffy than sex-like because of the abstinence. Awww.
Oh, and there's a missing quotation mark when Kaori is talking to Junoichi after the slash scene. Just thought I'd let you know :D
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*now totally needs to write a drabble where Yamagata throws a potted plant at Kai*
Thank you! Glad you liked it.
You have a good eye for detail :D