tallulahgs: (Happy Tetsuo)
tallulahgs ([personal profile] tallulahgs) wrote2007-04-29 08:35 pm
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Fanfiction update lol

Chapter Three of Under My Skin is up! Reviews appreciated. This chapter has some slash, of sorts, but nothing above a PG-to-mild-PG-13 level.

Crossposted to [livejournal.com profile] theharukiya.

[identity profile] tannakitten.livejournal.com 2007-04-30 03:39 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, that was good. What's the name of that ship, I wonder? It's like.. Kaimagata.. except not. Nice job with that fade-out after the slash scene, too. Lets your imagination go wherever it wants~

Though, I can't help but feel sorry for Kai. When/if Kaori and Yamagata's minds do get put back in their bodies, if Kai tries to make a move on Yama, he's gonna get punched into the wall and have every single swear known to man (and maybe a potted plant of some sort) thrown at him.

The chapter overall was really cute X3 It almost seemed more fluffy than sex-like because of the abstinence. Awww.

Oh, and there's a missing quotation mark when Kaori is talking to Junoichi after the slash scene. Just thought I'd let you know :D