Colourful fanfiction

[tallulahgs]

[Title] Exit Music
[Fandom] Akira (manga)
[Rating] PG to PG-13 for cursing and mention of death
[Summary] Written for 12_stories, prompt #3, Black. Also written for tannakitten in her response to the Why A loves B meme. Yamagata's final moments.

No one gonna save you now

Comments

[tannakitten.livejournal.com]

... ;-; NOO YAMAGATAAA WHY

That was really, really good. I loved all those broken-sentenced thoughts. It made it seem really fast-paced and frantic! And Paragraph Number... 9? Yes? Well, that was a totally convincing example that run-on sentences can really be used effectively.

Kudos, it was awesome. <3

[little-deadpets.livejournal.com]

Spectacular! :D