Colourful fanfiction
Oct. 4th, 2007 06:45 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
tallulahgs[Title] Exit Music
[Fandom] Akira (manga)
[Rating] PG to PG-13 for cursing and mention of death
[Summary] Written for![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-community.gif)
12_stories, prompt #3, Black. Also written for ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
tannakitten in her response to the Why A loves B meme. Yamagata's final moments.
No one gonna save you now
[Fandom] Akira (manga)
[Rating] PG to PG-13 for cursing and mention of death
[Summary] Written for
12_stories, prompt #3, Black. Also written for tannakitten in her response to the Why A loves B meme. Yamagata's final moments.No one gonna save you now
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Date: 2007-10-04 10:17 pm (UTC)That was really, really good. I loved all those broken-sentenced thoughts. It made it seem really fast-paced and frantic! And Paragraph Number... 9? Yes? Well, that was a totally convincing example that run-on sentences can really be used effectively.
Kudos, it was awesome. <3
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