Thank you so much for considering my request. I have read the manga and watched the movie. I have to say, naturally that the manga has more substance, but I wouldn't mind either cannon except for the relationship between Tetsuo and Kaori. I didn't consider it when I first wrote to you, so thank you for that option. :)
I loved the short stories that you sent me. There is so much subtly and not only are the characters incredibly well written, but genders too. I truly admire the complexity of relationships and situations created with simple and powerful language, and the fact that the work is short makes it that much more powerful. "Stories" where Tetsuo is recounting the different scenarios which may had lead him to be orphaned and the one in which he is speaking to,(for lack of a better phrase) Kaneda's corpse are my two(of many) favorites.
Oh, Syllables are painful at times. There are times where I read back to something I wrote, and it's like "Wait..What? How do I pronounce this again?" Yeah...then sounding out with one's fingers ensues. :P
Right now I'm trying to focus on a straight narrative, but when I do right poetry it is stream of conscious to create a story of sorts. I would be honored to share any with you, as I haven't shared or published any yet, thus having no actually feedback. But, I know sometimes it is difficult to read others' work when trying to write your own. And I, no way want to impose.
But, thank you dear. I patiently look forward to your LG Christmas goodies. <3
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I loved the short stories that you sent me. There is so much subtly and not only are the characters incredibly well written, but genders too. I truly admire the complexity of relationships and situations created with simple and powerful language, and the fact that the work is short makes it that much more powerful. "Stories" where Tetsuo is recounting the different scenarios which may had lead him to be orphaned and the one in which he is speaking to,(for lack of a better phrase) Kaneda's corpse are my two(of many) favorites.
Oh, Syllables are painful at times. There are times where I read back to something I wrote, and it's like "Wait..What? How do I pronounce this again?" Yeah...then sounding out with one's fingers ensues. :P
Right now I'm trying to focus on a straight narrative, but when I do right poetry it is stream of conscious to create a story of sorts. I would be honored to share any with you, as I haven't shared or published any yet, thus having no actually feedback. But, I know sometimes it is difficult to read others' work when trying to write your own. And I, no way want to impose.
But, thank you dear. I patiently look forward to your LG Christmas goodies. <3