D:!! You, my dear, are an expert at writing the suffering of others, and I like it. Fantastic fic! I feel reaaally bad for Sachiko and Sayu, and it's hard to imagine Light making up Pokémon stories. (Also - You used "Light" instead of "Raito," I realized. Any reason?)
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Date: 2008-04-19 02:24 pm (UTC)