Never trust the quiet ones. I was reading so fast I didn't even try to guess who had used the poison. I had a whole bunch of 'OMG', 'guh' and 'bloody hell' moments with that section. And once again, you did so well with Emily being a quiet, non-entity, I had completely forgotten she was with Sally & Alicia. It's super to see these quiet ones coming to the fore and still being so believeable. Go Violet! Well, not really. I don't want her winning.
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Date: 2008-07-22 11:25 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2008-07-23 12:06 pm (UTC)And once again, you did so well with Emily being a quiet, non-entity, I had completely forgotten she was with Sally & Alicia.
It's super to see these quiet ones coming to the fore and still being so believeable. Go Violet! Well, not really. I don't want her winning.
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Date: 2008-07-23 06:36 pm (UTC)Thanks very much for commenting - I'm really glad you're enjoying it!