Battle Royale ramblings

[tallulahgs]

For sashwizzled's benefit, mainly...



Plus points for:
- seeing Yuko's parents. That was so horribly sad, but very well done.
- the bit when Shuuya got the girls' bodies and... and made them hold hands... and cleaned off the worst of the blood... *cries again* Dammit, Shuuya can be an idiot, but I adored him then. That was such a great thing to do and... yeah.
- Mizuho's appearance not seeming just like Takami lost count of how many students were left alive.
- the whole bit with Mimura's body, which was poignant without being gory.
- Sugimura, in general, cos he was just so darn cute.
- Kayoko, in general, because she seems really realistic.
- Sugimura keeping a kitten in his desk - so funny!
- The ki thing. I thought it would be cheesy and annoying, but it wasn't; it was beautiful.

Minus points for:
- Yuko looking so disgusting when she fell off the tower. Darn it, in the book it just mentions blood! There's not intestines going everywhere!
- The many and varied appearances of Mizuho's underwear. Yes, I can accept that she took her clothes off because she'd got wet in the rain. But I don't really see her as a matching-lace-bra-and-thong type of girl. Now, black Gothic matching panties and bra I could accept. Also, her breasts were huge. She had a really weird body shape.

But overall, very good. If horribly depressing.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

awww... ;-; well, thanks for the link! ^_^ I'm planning to write a JSRF fic, so can I use your fics as study guides? I'm not copying them .. I just need some examples on writing and their character personalities.

well, bye!

[tallulahgs]

You're welcome to read the fics of course, but I think part of the fun of JSR is being able to make up your own characters, almost, because there's so little info, so don't get too focused on my ideas ^_^

[(Anonymous)]

yeah, i know.. but i don't really like ocs that much... It's strange though, some people tend to make Gum a hot head. I wonder why....

I might post it up, I might not...

Thanks and bye! :)

[tallulahgs]

No, I don't mean completely making up your own characters, but you know. You have a lot of freedom in JSR fiction.
Yeah... I guess that's just the vibe a lot of people get from her!

[(Anonymous)]

hmm... I see, well I'll see what I can do! Too bad there aren't enough of those JSR/F fics.

[tallulahgs]

No, there aren't.

[(Anonymous)]

It's soo hot! -_- I'm frying....